Request for feedback on Hyper Plan website

Posted by Andy Brice
Mar 22, 2019 at 10:43 PM

Paul Korm wrote:
>Andy I like the new layout.

Thanks!

>I think you should use this as the banner at the top
> >“Hyper Plan combines the simplicity of sticking colored notes to the
>wall with the flexibility of software.”
> >instead of
> >“Flexible planning and scheduling software…”
> >Which defines your and all your competitors. The “colored notes on the
>wall” is a “aha, I get it” sort of tag line.

The H1 title is important for search engine optimization and people are more likely to search for phrases like “planning software for mac”.

But I do want to make that line stand out a bit more.

>
>The .gifs are great. Well done.

They aren’t quite as crisp as I would like. But making them higher quality would probably make them too slow to load.

>I suggest you find a different font—something classy—and use a
>larger point size. The text on the page can stand out better.

I need to talk to a proper web designer about that. Just concentrating on the copy and structure at present. Fonts/Colors/Spacing/Responsive comes later.

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Andy Brice
https://www.hyperplan.com