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Posted by Paul Korm
Mar 22, 2019 at 09:28 PM

 

Andy I like the new layout.

I think you should use this as the banner at the top

“Hyper Plan combines the simplicity of sticking colored notes to the wall with the flexibility of software.”

instead of

“Flexible planning and scheduling software…”

Which defines your and all your competitors.  The “colored notes on the wall” is a “aha, I get it” sort of tag line.

The .gifs are great.  Well done.

I suggest you find a different font—something classy—and use a larger point size.  The text on the page can stand out better.